how to develop rap flow?

hello i am 17 yrs old n i love writing rap n its been about 3 months i
started recording.people say ive good lyricism if not the best but i
keep gettin comments on my flow they say i flow the same on every
verse i drop...my mic is very cheap.....n i have to literally yell at
the mic to get the input for audible output....is that the problem or
should i experiment with rhyme schemes or vocal styles.plz help if u'd
like to listen my verses n give me answers:- i ve given them in order
of dates the first one is the oldest tell me how much ive improved
too.thnx for u help ;)

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World of Warcraft - Wrath of the Lich King - Cinematic Trailer.mp4

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Who is ur favorite Beatle and why?

Mine is Paul
Because i like his music style and specially the voice

what is the theme song for the glades ?

300 (2006) BRRip x264

300 (2006) BRRip x264-ZoNe
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minecraft: adventures of death valley trailer

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This is a trailer for my new series; adventures of death valley. In
my new series I will be building, exploring, taking requests and
destroying. (TNT) I aim to put out a video at least every other day.
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my cousin and i are doing are fist duo and we are loooking for a contemporary song we 14 and 17 (no sad songs?

this is our first duo and we want a song that can be inspiring and i
just want to let her know that im gonna miss her when she goes to
college and what an impact she had on my life and in my dance career
... thanks :)